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BEC中级写作--大作文【商务建议】

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大作文真题二: 题目讲解及范文


  下面我们来分析商务建议的写作要求:
  Your company requires a taxi firm that it could use on a regular basis for staff and clients. Your secretary has selected two advertisements from the local newspaper.
  Look at the advertisements below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.
  Then, using all your notes, write a proposal for your line manager, saying which firm you think your company should use.
  Write 120~140 words on a separate sheet.


  
  

    题目解读
  该题的提示信息为:“1:建议出租车公司;“2写建议给的直线经理;“1材料:两个出租车公司在本地报纸上的广告。
  
  内容与形式
  内容方面,商务建议强调给出最终的意见和理由。TELECARS公司的特点在要点1和2中体现,公司经营时间长,其他用车单位评价良好,写作时可展开为准时、安全记录好等;公司需要它全天服务的特点,展开为公司的员工和客户用车时间不规律。STREETLIGHT CABS公司的特点在第345中体现,新公司没有参考记录,但其服务不受距离限制,展开为的公司的客户遍及各地,但其没有网络定车服务,不够方便。考虑到第一个公司优点明显,第二个公司没有参考记录,而且不能网络定车,最终选择第一个公司。

 

   形式方面,商务报告和商务建议大体类似,惟一的差别在于用建议替代了结论部分。需要标题,如本题可采用Proposal on Taxi Firm Selection。主体部分:介绍(INTRODUCTION),概括建议内容,从两家出租车公司中择优选择。发现(FINDINGS),分两段描写两家公司情况。建议(RECOMMENDATIONS),选择第一家公司,说明原因。
  
  

范文:
  Proposal on Taxi Firm Selection
  INTRODUCTION
  The purpose of this report is to evaluate and recommend a taxi firm that would become our regular transporter. We will need one especially during next year, trade fair and conferences. There are two firms to evaluate.
  
  FINDINGS
  As regard to Telecars, we have good references for it. It is a very experienced traditional firm and is also very reliable. It provides 24-hour service that is useful during night meetings and negotiations.
  
  Streetlight Cabs is a brand new company and there are no references for it. It provides long distance routes which we use very often and it is also cheaper. But it does not have a website and thus internet booking is not available.
  
  RECOMMENDATIONS
  I recommend choosing Telecars because of its good references, long tradition and reliability.

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